Refine homepage and brand copy to studio-focused messaging - #5
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| { "step": "02", "title": "Preview concepts", "desc": "Choose from polished concept directions that show pose, mood, palette, base style, and gifting intent." }, | ||
| { "step": "03", "title": "Customize details", "desc": "Select size, finish, color language, packaging, engraving, and special notes before production." }, | ||
| { "step": "04", "title": "Approve and track", "desc": "Place a mock order, review summary, and follow a live-like production timeline until delivery." } | ||
| { "step": "04", "title": "Approve and track", "desc": "Confirm your order, review the summary, and follow production updates until delivery." } |
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When the homepage renders this step, it now promises users they can confirm an order and follow production updates until delivery, but the linked flow is still a mock: review-checkout.html labels checkout as a mock order and initReviewCheckout only saves details to localStorage before redirecting to the JSON-backed tracker. Users starting from the homepage can therefore think they are placing a real production order; keep the disclaimer here or make the downstream flow actually submit orders before making this promise.
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Pull request overview
This PR updates Memorialize’s homepage and brand/home JSON copy to shift the site’s tone from demo/founder-first language to more studio-focused, service-oriented messaging.
Changes:
- Revised hero/owner/about copy in
data/brand.jsonto emphasize studio-quality craftsmanship and a founder-operator posture. - Reworded
data/home.json“how it works”, categories, and FAQ entries to remove demo-internals language and read more like a production ordering flow. - Updated homepage (
index.html) section/subtitle/footer/newsletter copy to match the refined brand tone.
Reviewed changes
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| File | Description |
|---|---|
| index.html | Updates homepage hero, section subtitles, and footer/newsletter copy to align with studio-focused messaging. |
| data/home.json | Rewords steps/categories/FAQ to remove demo-internals language and present a service flow. |
| data/brand.json | Refines hero/owner/about messaging to emphasize studio-level care and service positioning. |
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| <p>© 2026 Memorialize. Personalized keepsakes crafted by Sanskar and the studio team.</p> | ||
| <form class="newsletter" id="newsletterForm"><input type="email" placeholder="Email for studio updates" required><button class="btn secondary" type="submit">Subscribe</button></form> |
| <p>© 2026 Memorialize. Passion-led personalized gifting by Sanskar.</p> | ||
| <form class="newsletter" id="newsletterForm"><input type="email" placeholder="Email for founder notes" required><button class="btn secondary" type="submit">Subscribe</button></form> | ||
| <p>© 2026 Memorialize. Personalized keepsakes crafted by Sanskar and the studio team.</p> | ||
| <form class="newsletter" id="newsletterForm"><input type="email" placeholder="Email for studio updates" required><button class="btn secondary" type="submit">Subscribe</button></form> |
Motivation
Description
data/brand.jsonto reviseheroTitle,heroSubtitle,owner.shortBio,owner.quote,about.mission, and the satisfaction stat label to emphasize studio quality and service language.data/home.jsonto rewordhowItWorkssteps, category descriptions, andfaqentries so they no longer expose demo internals and instead read like production ordering and preview guidance.index.htmlto change the hero badge text, the art-card paragraph, the founder heading, several section subtitles, the footer copy, and the newsletter placeholder to match the new brand tone.index.html,data/brand.json, anddata/home.json.Testing
python -m json.tool data/brand.jsonandpython -m json.tool data/home.json, both succeeded.rg -n "mock|Mock|college project|passion-led|JSON mock|demo|founder-owned|owner-led" index.html data/brand.json data/home.jsonto confirm replacements.git diff --checkto ensure no trailing whitespace or diff issues. All automated checks passed.Codex Task