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I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough, that you read the entire post from oxide.

Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

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Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.

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Hyphenated compound modifier 'LLM-generated'.

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I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.
I cannot know for sure it was LLM-generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.


I had stopped responding to this person. I had lost any respect I had for the sender. If I wanted to get a response from Gemini, I would go to Gemini myself.

If you're unwilling to expend an effort in communicating your thoughts, don't expect someone else to expend an effort trying to digest it. It's both disrespectful to the user and to you as a writer as well.

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Corrected pronoun agreement: 'them' should be used to refer to the plural 'thoughts'.

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If you're unwilling to expend an effort in communicating your thoughts, don't expect someone else to expend an effort trying to digest them. It's both disrespectful to the user and to you as a writer as well.

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> http://rfd.shared.oxide.computer/rfd/0576

I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.

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I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time, I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.


I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.

Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

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Last week, I received my first LLM-generated email response.


Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.

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I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.
I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in Markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.

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Writing is thinking clearly.

If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!

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Added a comma after the introductory phrase 'With code'; corrected the plural 'pull-requests' to 'pull request' to match the singular article 'A'; and removed the incorrect hyphenation of the noun 'pull request'.

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If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!
If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code, this is even more pronounced. A pull request, even a badly written one, if created by a human is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!


[This](https://www.bigtechnology.com/p/writing-crystalized-thinking-at-amazon) article further crystallized it for me.

Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but you it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.

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Corrected the typo 'but you it's' to 'but it's' and removed the unnecessary hyphen in 'slide deck'.

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Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but you it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.
Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide deck or a verbal presentation, but it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.


Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but you it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.

A well written article is a sign of clarity. If you're unable to write one, it just means you haven't thought things through yet. Writing (and rewriting) your thoughts over and over again, clarifies the thoughts in your mind and solidifies your understanding.

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Hyphenated the compound modifier 'well-written' and removed the unnecessary comma that was separating the subject from the verb.

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A well written article is a sign of clarity. If you're unable to write one, it just means you haven't thought things through yet. Writing (and rewriting) your thoughts over and over again, clarifies the thoughts in your mind and solidifies your understanding.
A well-written article is a sign of clarity. If you're unable to write one, it just means you haven't thought things through yet. Writing (and rewriting) your thoughts over and over again clarifies the thoughts in your mind and solidifies your understanding.

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I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.

Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

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Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.
Last week, I received my first LLM-generated email response.


Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.

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Hyphenate 'LLM-generated', capitalize 'Markdown' (proper noun), and added a comma after 'content' for list consistency.

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I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.
I cannot know for sure it was LLM-generated, but there were hints in the prose, content, and timing. A large portion of the email was written in Markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.


I had stopped responding to this person. I had lost any respect I had for the sender. If I wanted to get a response from Gemini, I would go to Gemini myself.

If you're unwilling to expend an effort in communicating your thoughts, don't expect someone else to expend an effort trying to digest it. It's both disrespectful to the user and to you as a writer as well.

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Pronoun agreement: 'them' should be used to refer back to the plural 'thoughts'.

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If you're unwilling to expend an effort in communicating your thoughts, don't expect someone else to expend an effort trying to digest it. It's both disrespectful to the user and to you as a writer as well.
If you're unwilling to expend an effort in communicating your thoughts, don't expect someone else to expend an effort trying to digest them. It's both disrespectful to the user and to you as a writer as well.


Writing is thinking clearly.

If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!

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If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!
If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort, is deserving of nothing!


[This](https://www.bigtechnology.com/p/writing-crystalized-thinking-at-amazon) article further crystallized it for me.

Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but you it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.

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Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but you it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.
Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.


Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but you it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.

A well-written article is a sign of clarity. If you're unable to write one, it just means you haven't thought things through yet. Writing (and rewriting) your thoughts over and over again clarifies the thoughts in your mind and solidifies your understanding.

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Hyphenated 'well-written' as a compound adjective and removed the incorrect comma separating the subject from the verb.

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A well-written article is a sign of clarity. If you're unable to write one, it just means you haven't thought things through yet. Writing (and rewriting) your thoughts over and over again clarifies the thoughts in your mind and solidifies your understanding.
A well-written article is a sign of clarity. If you're unable to write one, it just means you haven't thought things through yet. Writing (and rewriting) your thoughts over and over again clarifies the thoughts in your mind and solidifies your understanding.

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> http://rfd.shared.oxide.computer/rfd/0576

I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.

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I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.
if you have time, I cannot


I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.

Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

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Writing is thinking clearly.

If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!

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If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!
With code, this


Writing is thinking clearly.

If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!

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minimal effort, is


[This](https://www.bigtechnology.com/p/writing-crystalized-thinking-at-amazon) article further crystallized it for me.

Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but you it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.

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Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but you it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.
wonderful thing; you


[This](https://www.bigtechnology.com/p/writing-crystalized-thinking-at-amazon) article further crystallized it for me.

Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but you it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.

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I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.

Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

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Last week, I received my first LLM-generated email response.


Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.

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I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.
I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in Markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.


Writing is thinking clearly.

If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!

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If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!
If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort, is deserving of nothing!


[This](https://www.bigtechnology.com/p/writing-crystalized-thinking-at-amazon) article further crystallized it for me.

Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing; you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.

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Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing; you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.
Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing; you can bluff your way through a slide deck or a verbal presentation, but it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.

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I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.

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Last week, I received my first LLM-generated email response.


Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.

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I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.
I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in Markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.


Writing is thinking clearly.

If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!

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Added a comma after the introductory phrase 'With code' and a closing comma for the parenthetical phrase 'with minimal effort'.

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If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!
If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code, this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort, is deserving of nothing!


[This](https://www.bigtechnology.com/p/writing-crystalized-thinking-at-amazon) article further crystallized it for me.

Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing; you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.

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Removed the redundant word 'you' in the phrase 'but you it's impossible'.

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Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing; you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.
Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing, you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.

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> http://rfd.shared.oxide.computer/rfd/0576

I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.

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Added a comma after the introductory conditional clause ('if you have time') to improve readability.

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I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.
I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time, I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.


I find the above quote so wonderful, and if you have time I cannot recommend enough that you read the entire post from Oxide.

Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

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Hyphenated the compound adjective 'LLM-generated' because it modifies the noun 'email response' and precedes it.

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Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.
Last week, I received my first LLM-generated email response.


Last week, I received my first LLM generated email response.

I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.

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Capitalized 'Markdown' as it is a proper noun/trademark, and replaced the double hyphen with an em dash.

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I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in markdown -- which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.
I cannot know for sure it was LLM generated, but there were hints in the prose, content and timing. A large portion of the email was written in Markdown — which is something no human does in an email, and then there was the "You're absolutely right!! ... " response we've all seen in our chats. Finally, it was also filled with a general level of 'excitement' most humans never have, and the entire email lacked a 'soul'.


Writing is thinking clearly.

If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!

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Changed 'pull-request' to 'pull request' (noun form), replaced the double hyphen with an em dash, and added a closing comma after 'minimal effort' to balance the parenthetical phrase.

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If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull-request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review -- but a pull-request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort is deserving of nothing!
If you abdicate this to an LLM, you've stopped thinking, and your 'content' does not deserve anyone's time. With code this is even more pronounced. A pull request, even a badly written one, if created by a human, is deserving of at least a review but a pull request written automatically by AI in seconds, with minimal effort, is deserving of nothing!


[This](https://www.bigtechnology.com/p/writing-crystalized-thinking-at-amazon) article further crystallized it for me.

Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing; you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.

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Corrected 'slide-deck' to 'slide deck' as it is generally treated as two separate words without a hyphen.

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Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing; you can bluff your way through a slide-deck or a verbal presentation, but it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.
Amazon's writing culture was a remarkable thing, a culture that is now being eaten alive by GenAI slop (apparently!). Writing is a wonderful thing; you can bluff your way through a slide deck or a verbal presentation, but it's impossible to bluff your way through a written 6-page document.


A well-written article is a sign of clarity. If you're unable to write one, it just means you haven't thought things through yet. Writing (and rewriting) your thoughts over and over again clarifies the thoughts in your mind and solidifies your understanding.

So if you send me AI slop, I will disregard it. I will not expend my energies on something you yourself did not feel worthy of your attention. I suspect many others feel the same way -- so think wisely before you allow a bot to send your emails.

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Replaced the double hyphen with an em dash.

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So if you send me AI slop, I will disregard it. I will not expend my energies on something you yourself did not feel worthy of your attention. I suspect many others feel the same way -- so think wisely before you allow a bot to send your emails.
So if you send me AI slop, I will disregard it. I will not expend my energies on something you yourself did not feel worthy of your attention. I suspect many others feel the same way so think wisely before you allow a bot to send your emails.

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