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fix: correct years of technical selling and remove buzzwords#55

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  • Fixes it says 15 years technical selling, it should say 10 #53: "Fifteen years of technical selling" → "A decade" (technical selling started at Cloudera in 2015, ~10 years ago)
  • Fixes remove buzzwords and cliche terms #54: Remove buzzwords and clichés — replace with concrete, experience-grounded copy:
    • "community growth" → "technical writing" in the Where I Focus blurb
    • "Mission-critical distributed database work" → "Distributed database depth at startup scale"
    • "mission-critical hospital operations" → "hospital operations"
    • Vague Skills & Signals blurb → concrete career arc sentence
    • "Cloud Native Solutions" + "Agile Technical Delivery" → "Technical Pre-Sales & SE Leadership" + "Kubernetes, containers, infrastructure-as-code"

Test plan

  • Open index.html locally and confirm hero reads "A decade of technical selling"
  • Confirm 15+ years stat in hero proof bar is unchanged (refers to overall IT career, 2009–present)
  • Confirm no remaining "mission-critical", "Cloud Native", or "Agile" in user-facing copy

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- "Fifteen years" → "A decade" for technical selling (Cloudera 2015 = ~10 years)
- Replace "community growth" with "technical writing" in focus blurb
- "Mission-critical distributed database work" → "Distributed database depth at startup scale"
- Drop "mission-critical" from Maimonides entry
- Replace vague skills blurb with concrete career arc sentence
- "Cloud Native Solutions" + "Agile Technical Delivery" → specific replacements

Closes #53, closes #54

Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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remove buzzwords and cliche terms it says 15 years technical selling, it should say 10

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