docs: fix grammar and informal language in device sharing guides#393
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- Fix subject-verb agreement in vastai guide ("provide" -> "provides")
- Rewrite redundant vastai capability description to be informative
- Remove casual "you're actually" phrasing in enflame and iluvatar docs
- Replace contractions and informal phrasing with formal equivalents
- Rephrase "fill in" to "specify" in iluvatar exclusive-use notes
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I don’t think the problem stems from me; sth like this happened on @rootsongjc before. |
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provide->providesyou're actually requesting) from Enflame and Iluvatar device granularity sectionsdon't,you're) with formal equivalents across affected filesfill in the core and memory valuestospecifyin Iluvatar exclusive-use notes (two example files)