Add Bloom Hour Chapter 2 draft: The Aperture of the Now

[Dylusive]

Summary

• Adds content/bloom-hour-chapter-02-draft.md — the Academy scene where Nemo disrupts the Chief Orthographer's forced linguistic amputation ritual
• Fixes the naming collision from the source vision draft: "Carl" the villain renamed to "the Chief Orthographer" (title only) to avoid collision with Coyote Carl the student established in Chapters 0–1
• Fixes "Evra" → "Nvra" throughout to match the character established in prior chapters
• Appends editorial notes re: Academy/Monastery structural placement for author review

Editorial notes in draft

• Academy vs. Monastery: The Chapter 2 setting is "the Academy" — needs one line of orientation clarifying its relationship to the Mystery Monastery (institutional foil, flashback, or same location under the State's lens)
• Chief Orthographer naming: Title retained, personal name deferred to author — current draft uses title only
• Thirty-three children: Verify against established student count from Chapters 0–1

Test plan

• Author reviews naming fixes (Carl collision, Nvra spelling)
• Author answers Academy/Monastery structural question
• Continuity pass against Chapters 0–1 manuscript

https://claude.ai/code/session_019ydydbUD3WW33ct31KSpRL

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